Peachpaw (2nd)

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Peachpaw was excited to go to her first training session with Brownthorn. She waited by the muddy entrance as the sun appeared through the camp. Nervously she looked at her mentor coming up to her. He meowed, "Good morning, Today we are going to look at different scents and what is in our territory."
Peachpaw nod in response and walked behind him. Peachpaw looked ahead and notice a river. She ran up to it and splash in the puddles and the moss bits quickly ignoring Brownthorn. Brownthorn looked hard on his apprentice and hissed," Don't you know any better to go by the river when YOU DON'T know how to swim. "
Peachpaw meowed, "I am sorry, but why are you worried?"
For a long time Brownthorn didn't say anything.............

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Brownthorn finnally said, "Many apprentices died because of the river and i don't want to lose the first apprentice of Dolphin clan on the first day of training now let us move on." Brownthorn thought to himself, no apprentice ever ask WHY they just do it and their is something different about her."
Peachpaw walked beside her mentor on the grassy path. when they got to the island
Brownthorn touch her shoulder as for her to stop but Peachpaw felt something different but it was not happy..........................




Peachpaw felt like she was watching someone die with out anyone to help him and the agonizing pain went through body of the loss of someone and she actually yelled aloud. Brown thorn looked strangely at her and hissed what are you doing don't you know you are scaring all the prey in the forest."
"I am sorry i got a needle in my paw." She looked away. She didn't like lying, but she couldn't tell him about what just happen. But what was it........................