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Post by bluebird on Nov 5, 2006 19:54:16 GMT -5
Smokefur walked to snakeclan terriotory after what had just happended he never wanted to see Hawkclan again. He padded to their camp. A couple of cats looked at him hissing and spitting but he ingnored them the only thing he came for was to talk to Blacknight. He desperatly wanted to become the Deputy to Snakeclan. But would Blacknight let him in?
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 6, 2006 8:42:09 GMT -5
Greyfur was sitting outside the entrance staring at the spot where one of her claws should've been. She saw Smokefur and started the alarm, Blacknight hissed as he jumped out in front of Smokefur. "what do you want, clannie," He meowed," our clan dosen't have a spot for you unless you are a traitor, or a loner." Greyfur went inside to get Crystalwing for a fight as Blacknight stared malicously into Smokefur's eyes.
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Post by frost2fur on Nov 6, 2006 15:25:05 GMT -5
Crystalwing saw Greyfur coming over, and by her expression could instantly tell what was happening. Crystalwing purred in her cold, raspy voice "Must be a clannie! I'll make sure he's blind by the time he's left here." She then walked over to answer Greyfur's message. She meowed, "Don't even need to speak. Who is he, a piece of fresh-kill? Oh, I know! He's a flower!" She left the den, chuckling at her joke. Note: I corrected this for you by replacing 'said' with 'meowed'. that is how cats talk, don't forget to look at the rules . (this was Mosstar) Reply to Note ;D : Ok, thanks. I posted that in a hurry because my dad wanted me off of the computer. I slip up when I hurry
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Post by bluebird on Nov 6, 2006 16:50:08 GMT -5
"Get away from me I am here to see Blacknight! If you are looking for a tratior your looking at one. Just this morning I attacked my clan leader and the deputy. Icestar's rule was soft and stupid that is why I have come to join Snakeclan. I would also like to be the deputy."
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 7, 2006 9:04:39 GMT -5
"Permission granted," Blacknight meowed as he padded back into the camp. "Welcome to the clan," Greyfur meowed," you're lucky for Blacknight not challenging yopu for you to join, Because i lost a claw to him in a fight."
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Post by bluebird on Nov 7, 2006 9:30:56 GMT -5
Smokefur dipped his head. " Thankyou Blacknight I cannot wait to serve Snakeclan."
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 7, 2006 13:32:22 GMT -5
"your name will be changed tonight," Blacknight meowed," so don't miss it." Greyfur padded into her den and fell asleep.
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Post by frost2fur on Nov 7, 2006 17:00:54 GMT -5
Crystalwing mrrowed, "And I really wanted to rip a clannie apart." She then perked up, grinning. She meowed with laughter to Smokefur, "But if you tried to rip your leader and deputy apart to get our approval, you must not be that hard to be around." She padded into the warriors' den, still purring with delight at their new clan member's actions.
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Post by bluebird on Nov 7, 2006 18:15:44 GMT -5
"I will take that as a compliment," Smokefur meowed. Smokefur couldn't wait until his ceromony, but he wondered why he had to change his name.
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 7, 2006 18:38:49 GMT -5
The sun had set and Blacknight bit each of thier tails to wake them up for the name change. "we do not honor Starclan here," Blacknight meowed," so we won't say stupid ceremony rules. smokefur, I give you the name Darkheart for your treceary against your former leader. do you accept the name?" Greyfur pushed Smokefur in front of Blacknight and poked his flank with a claw.
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Post by bluebird on Nov 7, 2006 20:07:34 GMT -5
Smokefur hissed at Greyfur for poking him and then continued to walk up in front of the clan. " I accept the name with dark honor Blacknight."
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Post by frost2fur on Nov 7, 2006 21:12:28 GMT -5
Crystalwing thoguht Darkheart served well as a new name. She went over to him and said, "Congrats, Darkheart. Welcome to our 'clan'." She turned, and without looking over her shoulder mrrowed jokingly, "Stay out of my bed and we'll be best friends."
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Post by bluebird on Nov 7, 2006 22:09:14 GMT -5
Good, I can't wait to start my deputy duties in the morning. Darkheart followed Crystalwing into the den.
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 8, 2006 8:02:10 GMT -5
"oh and don't forget Darkheart, to not order patrols because we don't need clannies around here," Blacknight meowed," oh and the deputy den is that way, over by my den."
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Post by bluebird on Nov 8, 2006 16:47:07 GMT -5
thank you Blacknight I will talk to you in the morning about somthing but not right now I need rest. I have had a long day.
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 9, 2006 7:53:41 GMT -5
The next day Blacknight was up early, he stalked an intruder through the marsh and found out that it was a clannie. He knew that the clannie picked up his scent.
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Post by bluebird on Nov 9, 2006 16:41:40 GMT -5
Darkheart heard that there was a clannie in Snakeclan territory and was curious to see who it was. He couldn't wait until Blacknight retuned so he could share his evil plot.
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 10, 2006 10:18:37 GMT -5
Blacknight, had an evil sneer on his face as he instantly took his anger out on a boulder and got a hang nail by doing that.
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Post by frost2fur on Nov 10, 2006 14:02:54 GMT -5
Crystalwing heard the news of a clannie in their territory. By her own instinct, she almost rushed right out of the camp to go tear him or her apart. But she quickly stopped herself, and instead went back to her little self-appointed task. She was re-making her bed, as she did every morning. (She has issues with beds They have to be perfect.) She pounded the earth so flat that it felt like stone, then filled it with soft, dusty dirt. She laid down. "Perfect." She then got back up and went to go hunt. She found a mouse, and being hungry, ate it.
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 10, 2006 21:02:04 GMT -5
Greyfur was padding around in the swamp sniffing around for traces of the clannie, and to get a bite to eat. In Snakeclan you hunt on your own and defend yourself. She caught the scent and reconized the clannie, it was Mosstar...
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Post by frost2fur on Nov 13, 2006 16:03:16 GMT -5
Crystalwing slowly creeped around the brush. She wasn't hungry anymore, but why not prevent the waste of time later? She caught a mouse and a small bird, and leisurely ate both, still sniffing for the clannie. "There's a clannie around, I hear, and eating my fill now will keep me from running off before they come. Besides, I'll be extra strong. I could rip 'em apart even faster!"
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Post by Mosstar on Nov 14, 2006 14:00:31 GMT -5
Mosstar padded around the mud-filled bog sniffing for scents of the cat that followed her that one day. She was really convinced about who the cat was, but couldn't et a hold on the scent. She then smelt a fresh scent and she found it out, it was........ Greyfur.
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Post by bluebird on Nov 18, 2006 17:36:49 GMT -5
Darkheart padded around the clearing pacing impaitently he needed to speak to Blacknight NOW he cannot wait any longer!
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Post by frost2fur on Nov 19, 2006 10:54:24 GMT -5
Crystalwing popped back through the dead brush, into the clearing. Her stomach bulged. She had eaten well. She saw Darkheart furiously pacing back and forth in front of Blacknight's den. She padded back into the middle of the brush wall, and silently but swiftly crouched up on Darkheart. She got to a spot where he would walk right in front of her, and then waited. As he walked closer, still oblivious to her presence, she caterwauled extremely loudly, "Hello Darkheart! What are you up to?"
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Post by bluebird on Nov 19, 2006 13:59:33 GMT -5
Darkheart hissed in suprise and then answered. " I need to speak with Blacknight! I have been waiting for a long time where is he!!!!"
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